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  • otsutsuki 3º Act- Clark sees the threat Brainiac poses and orders Kara to stay at the farm he saw her suit ripped he goes to his ship to get his classic suit when he sees his father Jonathan who gives him some advice he then says "Find your true north" and let it guide you, something you really care about and want to protect at all costs. And when you find him, you'll never be lost again", as Jor-El tells him "Why did we fall Kal? So we can learn to stand up.", then he flies to the pickup ship and starts fighting Nam-Ek and Faora, at the Kent farm Kara talks to Martha who tells her that she doesn't need to hide from this battle because "We are who we choose to be... Therefore choose!" then Martha hands him a suit made from Superman's first suit, she then recreates Superman's first flight in Man of Steel, at LexCorp Lois arrives so Luthor can find some way from defeating Brainiac when LexCorp is attacked by Brainiac's androids, Superman is having a hard time he defeats Nam-Ek who ends up being disintegrated by the ship's lightning, Faora captures Superman to extract the codex from him, Faora goes to LexCorp to stop the system of Luthor connects with Brainiac's she ends up seriously injuring Luthor's security and we find out that he is called John Corben, when she goes to kill Lois, Supergirl arrives and says "not impressed" she punches her so hard she got off the planet, Supergirl catches her goes around the sun and throws her back to earth and uses her heat vision, Faora falls so fast she collides with a pyramid in egypt and dying in the process, Supergirl takes the flash drive with a virus to shut down Brainiac's Ship, Kara saves Superman before the Codex is extracted, Jax-Ur dies by being crushed by a platform, the ship crashes in antartica where some wreckage is scattered, the final battle ensues and Brainiac proves to be far superior to Kal and Kara, he manages to defeat them, and tells them that he has observed humanity and has come to the conclusion that "Humans are nothing but scum. And they must be eliminated. I can see far beyond you boy, above this world. Above this universe. I look at the place where all the truth about creation comes from. That's how I came to the conclusion that humans must be extinct. The one error among all of God's creations is humanity. To transform the world... the universe... and even this planet into a far more beautiful paradise, I will eliminate humans. I WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO ACCEPT THIS MISTAKE FROM GOD" at that moment Superman gets angry and hits Brainiac and says "I feel like I live in a world made of cardboard, I take constant care not to break anything or hurt anyone and I don't I allow myself to lose control not even for a moment because someone could die. But can you, can't you, Brainiac? What we have here is a rare opportunity for me to finally let go and show you the true extent of my strength" he humiliates Brainiac who dies from being stabbed in the eye and dies from crashing into his ship automatically his ship destroys the collection of cities in Brainiac miniatures, but Kal uses Luthor's pen driver to shut down he succeeds but the ship but it ends up exploding, a few days pass and Clark and Lois go to visit Kara who is now living on the Kent farm, and says she's excited to staying on earth, Clark takes her to the barn where Kara uses her key on Kal's ship and sees a projection of her mother crying and saying she is proud of the path Kara has chosen she says "Be careful with your thoughts; they can become words." . Watch your words, they can become actions, Be careful with your actions, they can become habits, Watch your habits, they can become your character, Beware of your character, it may become your destiny.” after this message from her mother Kara and Clark go to dinner at LexCorp Eve says the Government accepted Lex's terms and he got the ship wreckage, he says he's excited for things to come, the flash driver at truth has downloaded all the files from the ship now Luthor has all the knowledge Brainiac had, we see Corben in a capsule and Eve asks what they will do Luthor replies "Consider the righteous, observe the righteous, there is a future for the man of peace. But all rebels will be destroyed, future for the wicked will never be." on the table we see a folder written project "METALLO" and the screen goes black Post Credits Scene: We see Kara and Clark on an island where Diana appears on a plane to take Kara to Themycera to train her, before going Kara says Clark should see the new Philadelphia hero where she shows the Shazam and Clark video says he's going to visit him.

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    • castingsinmyblood @otsutsuki You've got some good ideas, but it feels too fast paced and it's got some tonal problems. There's nothing wrong with it but I suggest inserting some breathing room into the story.

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  • otsutsuki 1º Act- The film begins with the logo of Warner Bros., Access Entertainment and DC Comics to the sound of the classic John Williams theme, then we see Krytpon on the brink of destruction we follow Kara Zor-El in the city of Argo City where she sees in front of the sun a ship shaped like a skull and tentacles and several androids destroyed the city and killing the civilians, we see the androids passing over the skulls of the dead (A scene very similar to the beginning of the Game Injustice 2 and the movie The Terminator by James Cameron) , Kara manages to escape thanks to her mother's help, Alura comments that Kara's uncle Jor-El has informed her that the Krypton Council has used the planet's core a lot and Krypton will explode and that he will send Kara's cousin Kal-El to a planet called Earth and she will do the same to Kara so she can take care of her cousin, when their lab is attacked, Kara is put on the ship with a key while she secures the place, Alura manages to defeat most of the androids but ends up being injured seriously and, the ship then departs towards planet earth she sees her cousin's ship next to hers, Kara promises to protect Kal against everything, that's when Krypton explodes and the planet's debris hits Kara's ship causing her to deviate and she gets lost in space screaming "No, No, No Kaaaaaaaal" the screen goes dark and we see the movie logo, the scene cuts to the present day after the events of ZSJL we follow Clark arriving at the Daily Planet where he is approached by Perry White who says it's hard to believe Kent faked his death as he was working for the US government (this was the way he found it). by Clark to explain his death) he also delivers a "letter from the government" explaining the situation, they go to a meeting at the Daily Planet where they pass by some frames with famous newspaper headlines which are some old events from DCEU movies like the Kryptonian invasion in Man of Steel, some feats of Superman being references to the character's films, comics and series, we also see an article written by Vicki Vale entitled "Batman: Hero or Vigilante", we see articles about the Trinity's fight against Doomsday seen in BvS, an article about a "natural disaster" that destroyed Midway City seen in Suicide Squad, we see an article honoring Superman after his death, an article about and the invasion of Steppenwolf and the formation of the Justice League, one about Superman's return with a photo of the team, and an article written by Doctor Stephen Shin that comments on his theory of Atlantis' existence, Perry then introduces the new one. photographer Richard Kowalski who will be Lois' working partner, Lois and Rick are assigned to cover a gala that has Lex Luthor as benefactor, Lois talks to Clark and says she's glad he's back at work and the world is safe now they could take the relationship a step further, but Perry arrives and tells Lois to hurry up to cover the story about Luthor, arriving at the scene Lois comments to Rick that Luthor may be up to something since he was recently imprisoned in Arkham Asylum, Rick even jokes that he may be a candidate the presidency, when we hear Lex's new secretary the beautiful and seductive Eve Teschmacher who announces Lex and who goes on stage and we hear his theme the camera records Lex's entrance from the feet turning around until we see him definitively this would indicate a change in his life he announces that he is sorry for his past and that he wants to make up for it by creating the LexorCity charity as he explains we see him being watched by someone this mysterious being says "target in crosshairs" Luthor's bodyguard sees this mysterious being on the roof and saves luthor from a gunshot, Clark is walking down the street when he hears an explosion he enters an alley removes his glasses, opens his shirt in the classic comic book fashion (He still has his black suit) he goes to the scene and saves the civilians including Lois and Rick, the mysterious figure is Robert DuBois the Bloodsport he and Superman end up having an epic fight, DuBois blows up a bridge where the debris will hit a kid who runs to get it his teddy bear, Superman saves him and says "Go back to your mother boy, don't worry, everything will be fine" and gives him his teddy bear, the child leaves but comes back and hugs Superman, DuBois takes advantage of the fact that he let his guard down and shoots him with a Kryptonite bullet, Superman uses his heat vision and hits him almost killing DuBois, General Swanick arrives to arrest DuBois, but he is stopped by Amanda Waller who arrives to arrest him and take him to Belle Reeve, she says that if he refuses deliver it she will reveal that the US government gave Luthor access to Zod's body and the Kryptonian ship that gave rise to Doomsday, Calvin is then forced to hand him in, he then takes Superman out of sight of the people he takes advantage of Superman is passed out and uses his powers to remove the bullet he leaves him near the Kent farm

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  • otsutsuki 2º Act- Lois and Rick are assigned to cover a gala that has Lex Luthor as benefactor, Lois talks to Clark and says she's glad he's back at work and the world is safe now they could take the relationship a step further, but Perry arrives and tells Lois to hurry up to cover the story about Luthor, arriving at the scene Lois comments to Rick that Luthor may be up to something since he was recently imprisoned in Arkham Asylum, Rick even jokes that he may be a candidate the presidency, when we hear Lex's new secretary the beautiful and seductive Eve Teschmacher who announces Lex and who goes on stage and we hear his theme the camera records Lex's entrance from the feet turning around until we see him definitively this would indicate a change in his life he announces that he is sorry for his past and that he wants to make up for it by creating the LexorCity charity as he explains we see him being watched by someone this mysterious being says "target in crosshairs" Luthor's bodyguard sees this mysterious being on the roof and saves luthor from a gunshot, Clark is walking down the street when he hears an explosion he enters an alley removes his glasses, opens his shirt in the classic comic book fashion (He still has his black suit) he goes to the scene and saves the civilians including Lois and Rick, the mysterious figure is Robert DuBois the Bloodsport he and Superman end up having an epic fight, DuBois blows up a bridge where the debris will hit a kid who runs to get it his teddy bear, Superman saves him and says "Go back to your mother boy, don't worry, everything will be fine" and gives him his teddy bear, the child leaves but comes back and hugs Superman, DuBois takes advantage of the fact that he let his guard down and shoots him with a Kryptonite bullet, Superman uses his heat vision and hits him almost killing DuBois, General Swanick arrives to arrest DuBois, but he is stopped by Amanda Waller who arrives to arrest him and take him to Belle Reeve, she says that if he refuses deliver it she will reveal that the US government gave Luthor access to Zod's body and the Kryptonian ship that gave rise to Doomsday, Calvin is then forced to hand him in, he then takes Superman out of sight of the people he takes advantage of Superman is passed out and uses his powers to remove the bullet he leaves him near the Kent farm, In space we hear screams and we see Kara Zor-El being tortured by Brainiac who is after the Krypton Codex since he has all the knowledge of the planet there, he tortures her but she doesn't know about the codex when the ship receives a signal from the phantom zone is Faora and the surviving Kryptonians of Man of Steel, Brainiac decides to bring them back as he has plans for them, Faora when seeing Kara she says she will make her suffer as she blames Kara for Ursa's death, Kara manages to use an escape pod and heads towards land, at the farm Clark and his mother talk about him and Lois taking their relationship a step further and how Jonathan will be proud of the man his son has become, at his house Lois and Clark talk about having a son, he feels insecure because he doesn't know if that's it he's ready for it they have a little argument, during the night Clark has a nightmare where he sees pregnant Lois being killed by a being in the shadows who says “I want you to remember this moment l-El, for the rest of your life, in your most intimate moments, I want you to remember those words I am entropy, I am death… I am Darkseid” he wakes up desperate Lois worries but he says it was just a nightmare , Perry calls them and warns that a meteor is going to fall in the harbor and that he needs one of the two of them there to cover this story, Clark takes off and Lois warns Perry that Clark is already going to cover, then we see Kara's ship crashing into the harbor and destroying some nearby buildings, Kara leaves there scared some men approach her and try to touch her but she defeats them, she leaves there causing an uproar she is chased and cornered by the police and Commissioner Gordon appears and makes the arrest voice but Kara loses control of her powers and uses her heat vision and destroys some cars and runs away, then we see a dark shed and Salvatore Maroni with his henchmen when Batman appears he and Maroni have an argument and Maroni says "We have guns" and Batman counters by saying "No, what you have are bu llets, and the hope that when your guns are empty I'm no longer standing, because if I am you'll all be dead before you've reloaded" the light in the place goes out and Batman defeats the henchmen one by one we can see Batman by the reflection of the shots he takes, Maroni shoots starts shooting at Batman who dodges the bullets Maroni says "Die! Die! Why won't you die?... Why won't you die?", Batman surrounds Maroni and tells Maroni "Beneath this mask there is more than flesh. Beneath this mask there is an idea, Mr. Maroni. And ideas are bulletproof.",cuts to Kara running away from Gordon, Batman appears and starts to face Kara he has difficulties but uses a bomb that erases Kara, Gordon with Batman and says that the world has gone crazy, when Gordon's phone starts to ring and he, and he talks to his daughter Barbara (but we don't hear her voice) he turns his back and talks to his daughter, he hangs up the phone and says his daughter loves Batman when he turns around Batman and Kara are gone and Gordon says "I don't know why I I'm still surprised", in the Batcave, Batman begins to analyze Kara's DNA but she wakes up and destroys his computer, when Superman appears and calms her down they start talking in Kryptonian when Superman says she is his cousin, Batman says that his cousin has just destroyed $50,000 worth of hardware, Superman says "Send me the bill" and Batman quips by saying "With your journalist salary? I know", Superman and Kara return to Metropolis where he explains the situation to Lois and Martha 2 weeks pass until we see Bruce, Diana and Clark in a coffee shop and he comments about Kara in less than 2 weeks having already learned several languages, Bruce says she has the potential to be a threat as in her DNA tests she has been shown to absorb more solar radiation and can lose control of her powers at some point, Diana agrees and offers to take Kara to Themycera to train her, Clack refuses saying he can't do that as she is possibly his only living relative asks them to give her a chance, Clark and Kara leave and she has a normal day shopping and getting to know earthly customs when she sees a statue of Superman and says that this is how humanity sees him as a Hero, Clark explains that he must be more than that, that it's hard to reconcile life like the shy and clumsy Clark Kent and the strong, fair and loyal Superman, Clark said that when she is ready "You will give the people of Earth an ideal to strive towards" when they are attacked by Faora and Nam-Ek, a big fight starts m As Superman defeats the two who flee, they return to the Kent farm where Kara explains to Martha, Lois and Clark about Brainiac's origin: On Yod-Colu, a great scientist named Vril Dox developed an advanced artificial intelligence called C.O.M.P.U.T.O. With it, Dox dared to look further than anyone ever had, into the Fifth Dimension. However, he has discovered what appears to be a war, and predicts the destruction of his world and so many others by a force he dubs "The Crowd". He has tried various methods to stop this force, from experimenting with his son to petitioning the government. But none of that worked, and he was arrested while being exiled. So Dox took a drastic measure: he used C.O.M.P.U.T.O. to build an army of robots, shrunk the city where he and his family lived, packed it into a spaceship and left the world to burn it then merges with C.O.M.P.U.T.O. and copying himself into an army of spaceships, Dox set out to save worlds from the crowd, saving the pinnacles of his culture in forcefield bottles using miniaturization. He became the collector of worlds. Whenever he finds a world that's on the list, he takes control of the world's infrastructure, has an army of robots pull them out of the ground, saving everything in a city, then he miniaturizes and freezes them to study them.

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    • jirihracek @otsutsuki I like the story and the Man of Steel sequel sequel should have been realized a long time ago. I'd just prefer to bring Kara Zor-El on the scene more true to the source material.
  • fredericarrowsmith As long as it has the same almost Mythic quality as Man Of Steel has I'm with it.

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  • cameronholmes I like it, you have great ideas

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  • user_2981 I think it's good

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  • josiahabner1 This is Awesome!

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  • marvelfanboy Spectacular

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  • jesuslopez That would be Perfect I Approve

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  • misterwolf My feedback is generally positive: my compliments are aimed towards its characterization, the action sequences, story, and improvements. However, just like the first film, I don't like the serious tonal approach to Superman. Other than that, if a movie like this were to come out, I would like it better than the first.

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