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  • thegreatestshowman Nice casting. Keep up the good work!

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  • jirihracek The whole story: We're following a Supergirl story that I would imagine is dark and uncompromising. A spaceship entered the Earth's atmosphere over US territory and the military tried to shoot it down. The damaged ship would then land in the suburbs of Metropolis. On board is the last girl to survive the destruction of the planet Krypton. Her name is Kara Zor-El. It would be a hard fall, but young Kara would make it out safely. She would be immediately affected by the radiation of our yellow sun, and would be confused by the abilities it would give her, and at first unable to cope with them. Scared and confused, Kara would encounter local thugs trying to attack her as she wandered the streets of the city. At the same time, however, armed commandos sent and directed directly by Amanda Waller would be after her, leading a secret government Cadmus project with orders to either capture or kill her. This would logically lead to an inevitable clash. Kara would have fought back desperately, killing dozens of soldiers until she was pacified with Kryptonite. The military would then capture her, and Waller would order her torture in order to get information about a possible threat from space. However, Rick Flag and a few of his people would quickly realize that she was just a scared girl who had no idea why they were doing this to her, so he would decide to save her because he would realize that what was happening was wrong, and more importantly, he would know that their leadership was mainly to blame for the previous losses. Superman would have been quick to notice the strange events in Metropolis, but since he was busy on the other side of the world when the spaceship hit his city, he would have been late. His first objective would be to find out who the ship belonged to. He would manage to get his hands on the wreckage of the spaceship that had hit his city, and from its records, a shocked Kal-El would find out who had come to earth in it, and would immediately realize that he had to find his cousin before it was too late. Meanwhile, Rick Flag would launch a rescue of Kara, who would be at the end of her physical strength. But the entire operation at the army complex would turn into a brutal massacre and would seem to end in failure. But the situation would be saved by Superman, who would level the entire secret facility and angrily pacify anyone who got in his way (but not kill). Kara would have been better off, but still not quite right. When she would see Superman she would remember her little cousin, and be surprised that he was an adult. He would then fly with her to Gotham to Bruce Wayne's secret headquarters. Together, they would try to get the kryptonite out of her body while finding out more about her fate. Batman wouldn't be too thrilled with the arrival of the unknown young Kryptonian and would warn Superman to be careful as he knows nothing about her. However, he would rebuff him, saying that Kara is the last girl from Krypton to survive and even his own blood, so he must protect her. Waller would be pissed enough to have Rick Flag and his people arrested and plan how to get her catch back. She'd have a tracking device planted in Kara's body so she could start putting together a new hit team. At the same time, a great evil would begin to approach the earth from deep space. Darkseid would learn of the events on Earth and send his daughter Grail to lead a small army to bring Kara to him. Kal-El, meanwhile, would have to come to terms with the fact that he was not the last living inhabitant of Krypton, and that he had in fact been given the chance to get part of his family back in the form of Kara. He and Kara would work things out and get along quite well. She would just still be bothered by how she had been hurt and also by the fact that she had been forced to kill so many people. Her cousin would promise not to let anything else happen to her. Then he would also start teaching her to control her powers. Her cousin would also give Kara the familiar suit he found in the wreckage of her ship. That's when the army's assault on Bruce Wayne's mansion would begin. Superman, Batman and now Supergirl would stand up to them. During the fight, the mansion would be devastated, but the attack would be repelled. At that point, Grail and her army would launch an attack on Gotham City to kidnap Kara. However, she would gradually break free and begin to threaten the entire city, forcing Superman and his cousin to confront her together. Batman, on the other hand, would go straight to kicking Waller and her people. In the process, he would free Rick Flag and destroy the samples of Kara's blood that were taken during her torture. Superman and Supergirl, meanwhile, would try to defeat Grail and her army while preventing casualties. The fight would be merciless and brutal, and the city would slowly begin to turn to rubble. Grail would slam Superman under the rubble of the skyscraper in the fight, leaving Kara and her alone and face to face. An angry Kara would kick her roughly, but it would be an even fight. It would've looked like Kara would beat her, but then a portal would open and out would come Darkseid himself. He would roughly fist Kara to the ground, and then grab her under the neck and lift her into the air, but at that point he would be roughly taken down by Superman. But their fight would end in victory for Darkseid. He would have tried to kill him with his omega beams, but Kara would have interrupted him and with the words "Leave my cousin alone" would have launched herself at him. In the end, the fight would end in a stalemate. All four of them would still be facing each other. But Dakseid would get tired of it and would just dryly state that this was only the beginning, because he would not give up the girl who had fallen from the sky so easily, and that he would come back for her soon. And then he would just walk back to his planet Apocalips with his daughter. Both Superman and Supergirl would be pretty exhausted by now, so they'd be glad it was over, but they'd both understand that they had to prepare for a rematch. Then Batman would arrive as well, and he wouldn't be happy about all the debris. Superman would then introduce Kara to Lois Lane and would also introduce her to his parents and explain everything to them. This would give Kara a new home and also make her decide that she wanted to be a hero like her cousin. While Waller would escape from Batman, at the very end of the Superman himself would punch a hole in the roof of her house, making it clear that she should leave Kara alone in the future or he would be forced to break his principles.
    • jirihracek @jirihracek Part two: After previous events, Wonder Woman would join Kara and Superman against Darkseid in addition to Batman. Also, another alien ship would arrive on Earth, and in it would be Mon-El, the prince of the planet Daxam. He'd get on Kara's nerves at first, but he'd also be fun to be around, so they'd gradually grow closer and do a lot of silly things. He would make Kara forget her worries for a while. But his irresponsible fooling around would distract her from preparing for the inevitable fight. Superman wouldn't be happy about her carefree fooling around with Mon-El, but Diana would remind him that Kara was still a young girl and needed to have some fun too. Only, after the two of them finally got together, Kara would be attacked by Darkseid's minions once again, led by Grail. Kara and Mon-El would overpower a lot of them, but they would just be too much. He would end up unconscious and Kara would eventually be defeated by the cryptonite and kidnapped. Superman would be pissed and would have to organize a rescue party for Apokolips. He, along with Wonder Woman, Batman and Mon-El would set out to rescue Kara. Only, after the big battle, Superman would discover that Darkseid had taken over her mind and would be forced to fight Supergirl. Eventually, he would manage to get her back. When Kara realized what Darkseid had done to her she would be angry and attack him. During the fight, Batman would activate the hell spores he would encounter designed to destroy planets. The fight between Supergirl and Darkseid would be uncompromising, but she would not defeat him alone. Eventually, Superman, Wonder Woman and Mon-El would team up to take him down. But he wouldn't back down. But then Batman would tell him what he'd done. Darkseid wouldn't believe him, so Batman would start a countdown that could lead to the destruction of his planet. That would leave Darkseid with no choice but to let them go. Back on Earth, they would all be properly tired and full of bruises, so they would need time to heal. Superman would hug Kara and be glad she was okay. He would berate himself for having to fight her, but she would tell him it wasn't his fault. Kara would then meet with Mon-El and he would tell her that he was worried about her. The two would basically finally admit their feelings to each other, and in the end, they would float over the city under a full moon and kiss for the first time. In the final scene, an angry Darkseid would tell his daughter that he's had enough of all the Kryptonians and Earthlings and would start planning his final showdown with the entire planet Earth.
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