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  • misterwolf Plot: 4-year-old David's alcoholic mother, Zoey, begins to cease drinking during her son's birthday, especially after her separated husband, Justin, gives David a present. Zoey takes David to his room, and gives him his father's present; as he goes to open it, he discovers that the object inside it has escaped it. He finds the present, who reveals itself as a stuffed bear named Teddy, and he befriends the boy and vows to guard him at all times, as he was sent by David's father for a reason.

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  • misterwolf Teddy tells David how he was made; he explains that Justin, having been distraught over leaving his own wife and son since the latter was born, befriended a spirit and made a stuffed bear for him to possess, and told him to protect David from the spirits that will haunt Zoey's house. Zoey overhears this and enters the room. Teddy explains the same story, to which Zoey breaks down into tears as she now knows the true reason why Justin left. She calls the latter, and they reconcile. The spirits mentioned by Justin invade the house and destroy it's electricity, giving Teddy the chance to do what he was tasked to do: protect David.

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  • misterwolf Martha, Zoey's mother, arrives to provide the group with food, weapons, and flashlights, before Zoey's father, Howard, sacrifices himself to save them. Justin arrives, but decides to distract the spirits before entering the house, and he manages to subdue one of them, the Shadow. He enters the house, and discovers Martha's lifeless body. Teddy, Zoey, and David manage to stay unnoticed by the Spirit, the most powerful of the two, before Justin finds and joins them.

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  • misterwolf The Spirit eventually finds the group, but they outrun him and hide; the Shadow goes rogue and fights the Spirit, giving the group enough time to head to the basement. Justin introduces himself to David, who accepts him as his father as he knows why he left. Teddy is forced to engage the Spirit after the Shadow is destroyed. The Spirit attempts to kill Teddy, but Zoey temporarily blinds him with her flashlight, saving Teddy before heading back down to the basement.

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  • misterwolf Teddy, knowing the Spirit will not back down, grabs a lighter and a water bottle. Zoey, David and Justin leave the basement, while Teddy and the Spirit engage again; Teddy is seriously injured, and he loses his right arm, but nonetheless, he destroys the Spirit with the lighter, then extingushes the flame with the bottle.

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  • misterwolf In the aftermath, Teddy, having been stitched back together by Justin, promises David that he will not stop protecting him. Zoey begins to repair her relationship with Justin, and she abandons her alcoholism completely. Teddy watches his first sunrise with Zoey, David and Justin, and remarks that it is "beautiful", before the end credits roll.

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  • otsutsuki Hey friend can you give your feedback on this old story of mine? Because I'm writing the sequel and I need to see in which aspects it can improve. https://www.mycast.io/stories/x-men-281

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  • otsutsuki Your story is very good, really I can see M. Night Shyamalan in this project this is amazing, congratulations brother

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